njstud
6/25/2012 3:20:03 PM
hi how are you doin? im very interested in getting to know you. maybe we can conect..
yours trully stephen |
njstud
7/13/2012 1:57:01 PM
hi how are you doin ? we are friends that get together once or twice a week and we would like to meet you we have a room in queens Sunday if you want to have let me know
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Analysis: The message sender below is a triple threat. First, his grammar usage and spelling abilities are impaired. Second, he messaged more than once with receiving a response and without saying anything warranting response. Third, it sounds like he and his friends want to run a train in this supposed room in Queens. So, I will not be letting him know if I “want to have,” because I want to not have.
I recommend the “want to not have” choice as well. “Come visit me! I have a hotel room!”